i kind of want to make a new deviantart, just cause theres so much crap in here...
have some stuff to submit so if you're browsing, check it out and comment.


asphixiating through a crackhe looked at me and said yellow isnt a fall colorasphixiating through a crack
but i said that i just wanted to dance and im thinking that if the light isnt coming from anywhere else that i could give it some kind of an outlet
im biting at your body while
we listen to the wooden floorboards crack and creak beneath our bodies bending at our weight
teardrops from the corners of my eyes slip past my cheekbones, melting down my body this is real and this is now remainder of me is liquid on the floor
ive been melting to fit your mold for weeks gone by
and it was frightening c


its the weight that you carryId like to go without a shadow of a doubtits the weight that you carry
But you were never mine except in my mind We had some good times, and a great first kiss That was close-eyed and sprawled through down blankets We were sitting Indian style-knee to knee Saying some stuff that I don’t quite remember And I glanced into your eyes and leaned forward a bit. My lips pressed hard against yours.
This is when we know it The time you know you’ll never leave
And true love really does last forever And that’s all the security that I'll ever need.


chicago lovei get off the train and he picks me up,chicago love
asks me 'how was the ride' after a tight embrace i curl into the front seat and hope its not a far ride... fourteen hours sitting down is just too much time to contemplate.
we pull into the driveway of a Chicago house, walk up the stairs and
he opens the door for me
i see a mother there, her tired eyes wishing
her house wasn't such a broken home she'll never realize what it's like not to be alone seeing her my head is telling me to count my blessings,
a friend on each finger but each gulp my heart takes sends  


a reattempted pheromonea malcontempt smile and a sidestepping note blabbering and chattering up your thighs follow my eyes - id like toa reattempted pheromone
and you see - id like to show
you what my pheromones feel constant variation and i wish this were real pressing hard a gainst me don't reckon your ways child be soft and we'll lapse in luxury oh wild child wont you satisfy my needs? youll be gon by morning" this lingering imagination, a hologram is my best friend tonight in this well cushioned bed inside my head i dont stumble and stutter and we both know whats going on


not a very good letter...dear everything i'm quietly being torn apart in this warm sunlight, this bathing heat giving me pins and needles as i stumble down this long road to destruction, litterred with bottles ive vanquished and tears ive dispatched of. i keep a picture of you in the hollow of my head for reference because in this congregation theres no segregation and all our antagonists are saints to look up to. dont think of me as a hopeless romantic as much as just hopeless...i'm not going to change the world and maybe it wont stop spinning, maybe it'l make room for us and maybe i'm too used up to know any better. for now i'not a very good letter...


Screaming EyesAt first, looking at her You’d never know All the pain she’ll never show The way she carries herself The way she walks, the way she acts You’d never know The joy her life lacksScreaming Eyes
Hidden in amber pools of light There’s a sadness that comes out at night And she’s laughing on the outside looking in Putting on a mask to hide her sins
As she runs worn fingers through her hair She screams out loud For someone to take away the despair The way she stares You’d never know How she has no one who cares But she won’t let you see Just ho


Pale OneYou're the quiet one in the corner though you're screaming deep inside You're the one begging to be out while wanting nothing but to hidePale One
You're the pale one in the mirror looking out from dark, puffy eyes trying so hard to conceal the pain while it eats you away inside
Art is your only true love, the pen is your only friend, and you feel it's only yourself on which you can depend
Pushed too far to want to come close, too beaten down to want to rise, yet only wishing for someone to hold you and wipe the tears from your eyes &nb
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All I know is that I know nothing.
anyway i'm lookin forward to seeing more of your stuff too
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ehh......
*SPLAT!* You've been hit by a snowball!! This is the beginning of the 2003 - 2004 deviantart snowball fight!!! Choose three of your friends.... and hit them with some snowballs!! (to do that, just copy paste this message to their account) The only rule is, you can't hit me back!! Bwah ha ha ha ha!!! Good luck, and try not to get hit!!
This fight started by ~nakira on December 5th!
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om mani padme hum
And post more, dammit!!!!
lucky me
so thanks for the opinion and little bit of critisim, i like to hear that instead of just praise-like comments ^^
-brita
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and it rawked your sawks right off.... right off...
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and it rawked your sawks right off.... right off...
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